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Guest Post: The Long Short Long and the Short Long Short

One of My Manuscripts

One of My Manuscripts

How do you write a book? How do you take the burning, raging tenderness of your story and fit it into sensible words with steady pacing, coherent characters, and foreshadowed plot twists? One of the great and terrible truths of writing is that it is an art form that requires hard core right brain and left brain skills. So how do you get both sides of your soul talking to each other and writing a book that actually, you know, makes sense?

First off, friends, I have some good news: you don’t have to get it all done in the first draft. First drafts of books are awful ninety-nine percent of the time. And if you are that other kind of unicorn that writes lovely first drafts? Then stop reading writerly blogs and get down with your own brilliance.

For the rest of us, I’d like to talk about the long-short-long and the short-long-short method of writing a book, which was written about in much greater detail in “The Modern Library Writer’s Workshop” by Stephen Koch. Go buy that book and read the chapter on Working and Reworking. It’s great.

But, well . . . since the internet’s main function is to turn all information into blips of data that feeds our ever shortening attention spans, I’ll summarize with my own spin on it.

If you write really fast for your first draft, if you let yourself flow and fly and breathe into it, great. But then the next time through you should agonizingly analyze all aspects of it and work out all the big and small logics of a novel. When you are done with that long draft, dust off your fairy wings and approach it one more time with swagger, throwing in all kinds of flourishes now that the bones are right. That’s the short-long-short method.

Or, conversely with the same-ish end result, if you spend months, years, or decades working on your first draft, be a damn hippy, stay up all night pounding away at the keyboard, and don’t look back as you zoom through it, inserting life, inappropriate jokes and weird metaphors into your manuscript. And then, you guessed it, read it again with your bifocals on and your cup of Earl Grey, sighing over your excesses as you tame this novel beast one last time in the long-short-long revision.

Good luck!

Headshot KatieKatherine Sparrow lives, loves, and writes in Seattle where every gray day is a beautiful one. She’s a Nebula Award nominated author with over twenty short fiction stories to her name. When she’s not writing blog entries for her agent, she’s writing picture books about devilish kids, middle grade books about monstrous tweens, and young adult books about scruddy punker teens who think they can fight the gods and win. Come say hi at katherinesparrow.net.

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Summertime, and the livin’ is easy…

il_340x270.613823579_k1k3It’s officially summer! Summertime: when I listen to the Grateful Dead a wee bit more, eat lots of Italian ices, barbecue most dinners, go to the beach, try to sleep later because my kids aren’t in school (usually unsuccessfully), drive with the windows open, forego shoes whenever I can, wear straw hats, grow more freckles (no matter what I slather on my face), kayak, listen for the ice cream man’s song, and read, read, read. Well, I always read, read, read!

Summertime is also when I try to catch up on all of my queries and requested manuscripts and try to work on some of my own writing.

So….

I will be closed to submissions for July and August. And, I will be taking a break from blogging. But, some of my clients have agreed to guest post for me! Look for posts from J.M. DiVerdi, M-E Girard, W.E. Larson, Susan Lubner, Joe McGee, Natasha Sinel, and Katherine Sparrow. And watch for another contest run by my fabulous intern, Tara Slagle, where we’ll be giving away YA books.

So, enjoy your summer! I’ll talk to you all in the fall!

And don’t forget to post comments on my clients’ guest blog posts. We love a nice conversation over here at The Blabbermouth Blog.

xo

Lindaph1214

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GUEST POST: How to be a Writer and a Stay-at-home Parent

mom pic (Katie)Congratulations! You are pregnant, or your partner is pregnant, or the long wait for adoption or fostering has finally come through and someday soon you, yes you, will have the dreamy, exhausting, and joyful job of being the stay-at-home parent to the new love of your life.

But… writing? Is this the death of writing? This modern life is full of depictions of parents who are 100% career go-getters or 100% nurturing mamas, but the middle ground? Does it even exist?

Well, here I am three years later with two kids and a daily writing practice. In the last three years I’ve gotten an agent (hi awesome Linda!), been nominated for a Nebula Award, published a bunch of short stories, polished two novel manuscripts, and written a third book. How does this wonder woman do it? Uh, well, poorly and with lots of missteps, but here’s some things I’ve learned along the way:

1. Before the kid even comes, figure out what you are going to do badly. If you want to write and have kids, something has to give. Me? My house is tragically, annoyingly, and terribly messy. It bugs me constantly and makes me feel like a loser. When people come over I clean up a tiny bit but mostly they have to hang out in my dirty house and pretend it’s not gross. But whatevs, I’m writing books, baby.

2. Give up the idea that you have to write a certain way. Once upon a time when you were first learning to write you found out how to trick your brain into writing and now it feels like “This is How I Must Always Write.” But trust me, you can learn different ways. I used to have a solid four hour chunk to write where I would listen to spacey Pandora stations and sip perfect cups of Turkish coffee. Now I carry around a little notebook to jot words in, type one-handed, and outline so I can do micro-chunks here and there. I’m learning dictation software and will get wetware brain implants to write the books for me as soon as they are available. (Why yes, I am a scifi writer. How did you guess?)

3. Parenting always comes first. You have a chapter you are itching to write and your kid gets sick? You have a brilliant idea you have to write down or you will forget and your son is teetering toward some stairs? The kid comes first. Find your Zen with this and don’t beat yourself up about it.

4. That said, when you really need to write, wake up at 4 a.m., or stay up to 4 a.m., and zombie through your week with caffeine. Your friends and family will wax poetic about self-care and making poor life-decisions but you know what? You’ve got to feed your writer soul sometimes.

5. Pick your projects carefully. Some manuscripts have four interwoven plotlines, twelve protagonists, and is the first book in a five book epic fantasy saga. Other books are picture books. Choose wisely.

6. Realize our culture is ridiculous and dumb about always being productive all the time forever and ZOMG, I just lost five seconds reading this sentence. Life is long. Writing is a marathon not a sprint. Sometimes unproductive times (like the three weeks you just lost to a collicky baby) are the well that you can draw on for ideas and brilliance later on.

7. Do your first drafts suck way more than they used to? Mine too. Sleeplessness and the endless work of parenting does not make for a brilliant and focused mind. Repeat after me: I can revise. I will make this shiny. Anything done poorly can be hacked at until it’s pretty, or at least beautifully ugly.

8. Kids are little for only a moment. My wonderful grandma, who had three kids and then went on to become a prominent Swiss psychoanalyst, says you have to focus and love your little ones because when you are ninety-six, like her, you will look back and remember what a short, bright blip having babies and toddlers was. So don’t have your head so much in the clouds and the stories that you miss this wild and amazing piece of life. That said, I’m going to go play with mine.

Some caveats on the things that make my current life possible:

I have the ginormous financial privilege of getting to be a stay-at-home parent.

My babies are easy. Some fantastic babies and kids have temperament, disability, illness, etcetera that make them a lot more work.

I have a partner I get to co-parent with. Lots of folks go it alone and I have no idea how this is done, but I am in awe of them.

I also have supportive family in the town where I live.

I don’t have any physical or mental illnesses or disabilities (knock on wood).

Headshot KatieKatherine Sparrow is a young adult science fiction writer and mom. She is also a consumer of ice cream, an urban hiker, and a robot made out of steel and love. She’s working on a book about monsters and the kids who love them a little too much. Her website is: katherinesparrow.net

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