I’m thankful that I didn’t over eat on Thanksgiving.
I’m thankful that I didn’t go near a store on Black Friday.
I’m thankful I live in a country where I can say what I think.
I’m thankful I get to do what I love to do, for my job.
I’m thankful I don’t have to think about how to use correct grammar, most of the time.
I’m thankful for all my electronic devices.
I’m thankful for imagination.
I’m thankful for my amazing family.
I’m thankful for flowers.
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Sixth grade was turning out to be an awesome year for Xander Cruz. Children
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