Friday Ramble: Road Trip to NESCBWI Conference!

For those of you who are waiting to hear who won the Flash Fiction contest, the winners will be posted next Wednesday, May 8th.

But for today: TGIF!

nescbwi13-logo-HI’m heading up to Springfield, Massachusetts this weekend, to participate in the New England SCBWI (Society of Children’s Book Writers and Illustrators) Conference. First of all, I’m really excited to be meeting some folks I’ve been chatting with on Twitter. I hope they know that I won’t be able to keep anyone’s name straight or attach those names in any coherent way to their faces and/or the faces they’ve shown me on their Twitter profiles. Just saying. But I’m told there will be some special candy imported from Buffalo, NY coming my way this weekend, so it’s all good.

Secondly, I’m  meeting with folks who have paid actual money for me to critique their query letters. I hope they know they didn’t pay that money for me to be particularly nice. I mean, I’m not a mean person (mostly), but I have been known to be a bit too straightforward on occasion. It’s fascinating to me how many people make the same mistakes. I broke my critiques up into 7 sections: The Introduction/Hook; Synopsis; Biographical Information; Structure of Query; Typos/Grammar/Word Usage; Reviewer Interest; and Additional Comments. I’m trying to be better about saying no to people’s faces, instead of saying, “Oh! Just send it!” For the ones I would pass on I’ve really just typed the no, but will still have to actually say it to them. I must say though that I’m blown away by how brave folks are for putting their work out there. I hate being the publishing dream killjoy, but I refuse to blow smoke up someone’s skirt either. And of course many people did many things right, too.

Lastly, my client, Stacy Mozer, and I are doing a breakout session on Saturday about what it looks like when you’re working on a manuscript with your agent and how your relationship with your agent can impact your manuscript. Stacy’s going to play the author and I’m going to play the agent. Should be fun! We made a fancy shmancy powerpoint and everything.

So, cheerio people! Go write <fill in your own number> pages on your work in progress and have a great weekend! I’m going to!

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Treat for Fiction Writers: Nurture Your Work in Progress; Nurture Yourself

HelgaFor those of you who entered, thanks for playing in the Flash Fiction contest! The contest is now officially closed. I tell you, Wolfgang, Helga, that baby and the Giant have had some amazing adventures this past week! Winners will be announced here on Friday.

Now, is there anyone who hasn’t seen me promoting the crap out of the Writing and Yoga Retreat that my friend Stefanie Lipsey and I have put together for this summer? (Do you live under a rock?) Well let me tell you a little bit about it.

img1When and where is it? It’s July 25-28, 2013 in Glen Cove, New York, which is a little over an hour by train from Manhattan and less than an hour from JFK and LGA airports. It’s in an area known as the “Gold Coast” of Long Island in a very Gatsby-esque mansion that was built by the Pratt family in 1910. Parts of the film North by Northwest were filmed there. It’s really cool and has an amazing pub.

Who’s it for? This is for fiction writers (MG, YA & adult) who have a work in progress. Ideally you should have written at least the first 10-20 pages of something, but if you haven’t that’s ok. To apply you’ll just need to send 8-10 pages of a piece of fiction you’ve already written. You can be unpublished or published. It doesn’t matter. What matters is that you have a commitment to writing and you’re ready for a weekend full of  inspiration, support, fun, good conversation and allotting time to writing.

yoga1Do I really need to be into yoga? Of course you don’t need to be into yoga. But you might want to try it if you never have. Or, if you’re into yoga, you can enjoy the twice daily classes. The yoga is totally optional but it will inform the weekend. That is to say, writing prompts and meditations are pretty darn similar and who doesn’t want to have a nice stretch to wake up or after a day of writing?

What will happen during the weekend besides writing and yoga? We’ll be meeting for two workshops each day, focusing on different parts of your work in progress: Character, Voice, and Setting. Each morning at breakfast we’ll talk about what we’re focusing on for the day. Then we go into the workshop to do some exercises, followed by a few hours of writing. We come together again for lunch and conversation. It’s a great opportunity to bitch and moan or exclaim and crow about your progress. Then some more writing time. Or if you need a break from writing, there’s a gym, sauna, steam room, indoor and outdoor pool, tennis courts, ping pong tables, and a gorgeous pub. (Did I mention there’s a pub?)

Friday night dinner will be a highlight. We’re having a casual dinner with some top New York editors. Cheryl Klein, Executive Editor at Arthur A. Levine Books, an imprint of Scholastic and Joy Peskin, Editorial Director at Farrar Straus & Giroux Books for Young Readers are our children’s literature editors. I’m still waiting for r.s.v.p.’s from the editors representing adult literature, but there will be at least two. This is going to be a great part of the weekend. It’s a totally informal event where you can ask questions, talk about writing, get the inside scoop, and find out from  experts what’s selling and why. It’s not a pitching opportunity. It’s like having dinner with a friend of a friend who knows tons about writing and publishing. On Saturday night we’re thinking about doing some kind of theme dinner, but we haven’t totally worked that out yet.

header_pub1910_2And then of course there’s the pub… Evenings at ‘Pub 1910′ are great. You can toss back a couple, if you’re into it. Or just shoot some pool, play foosball, throw some darts, or play the table shuffle board thingy that they have there. If there’s consensus in the group we may offer participants the opportunity to read from the material they’re working on, in one of the more private nooks of Pub 1910. And maybe (just maybe) we’ll even be able to arrange for some live music by some of our local (very talented) musician friends.

How much does it cost?  It’s $1,299, a veritable bargain. It includes a private room, 3 meals a day plus snacks, 6 small group writing workshops, 6 yoga classes, use of the luxurious facilities, dinner with some fancy shmancy editors, an opportunity to read from your work in a supportive environment… oh, and did I mention you also get a 10 page manuscript critique, good for 6 months after the retreat?

Why do I have to apply instead of just register? This is a retreat for people who are serious about their writing. It doesn’t matter if you’re a total neophyte or an experienced writer, what matters is that you’re doing it. We’re screening for commitment not expertise. Space is limited, we’re capping registration at 15 people, so you should apply now.

I’m coming from out of town, is there anything else to do around there, before or after? Some of the things that we think are cool are Kayaking and Stand Up Paddleboards at Seacliff BeachSailing from the Waterfront Center in Oyster Bay, going to one of the gorgeous arboretums in the area, Planting Fields Arboretum in Oyster Bay and Bailey Arboretum in Locust Valley, visiting Sagamore Hill, the home of Theodore Roosevelt, or checking out the Nassau County Museum of Art, which is also housed in a mansion (Bryce House, built in 1910). And then of course there’s all of Manhattan, hipster Brooklyn, Montauk and the Hamptons, and the vineyards of the north fork of Long Island. So yeah. There’s stuff to do here.

So, are you the right person to apply? Yes. Of course you are. And you know it. Do it now: Click Here.

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Interview with Brent Hartinger, author of Geography Club & The Elephant of Surprise

brenthartingerI am totally delighted to share this interview with my pal, Brent Hartinger, author of GEOGRAPHY CLUB and of the recently published fourth book in the Russel Middlebrook series, THE ELEPHANT OF SURPRISE.

1. GEOGRAPHY CLUB was your very first novel, and you’ve subsequently written 3 more novels in the Russel Middlebrook series, the most recent of which is THE ELEPHANT OF SURPRISE. What keeps you writing about these characters?

I’d like to say it’s just because I love them so much, especially the main trio of Russel, Min, and Gunnar — I think they’re really unique and different, not really like anything else in YA. But I feel that way about almost all my characters, so the truth is, I guess I keep writing these particular books because people keep wanting to read them.

One big writing truism among writers is that you’re supposed to write the book YOU like, the book YOU want to read. And I totally agree with that. But life sure is a hell of a lot nicer and easier when the book you want to write is also a book that lots of other people want to read too.

I’m just thrilled these books have found their following. I don’t have a massive fan base — but I knew that going in, because I choose to write characters who are weird and smart and dorky, oh yeah, and a couple of them are also gay and bisexual. That’s a super-niche audience, by absolute definition. 

 

Brent w/Cameron Deane Stewart, who plays Russel in Geography Club.

Brent w/Cameron Deane Stewart, who plays Russel in Geography Club.

That said, I have an extremely loyal readership — enough to make it more than worth my while to keep writing these books — and it seems have slowly grown over the years. With the movie version of GEOGRAPHY CLUB coming out later this year, maybe even more people will discover me, but if not, that’s okay too.

Honestly, I have the best of all possible worlds: I get to write EXACTLY what makes me happiest, and people pay me to do it. What’s not to love?

2. Do you feel like you’ve changed how you write these characters from when you first created them 10 years ago? Have they (or you) been influenced by changes out in the real world?

Great question. The characters themselves have always been relatively easy to write, but I absolutely think the characters have gotten richer and more interesting as I get to know them better over the course of the books.
Have I been influenced by the outside world? Well, that’s the thing. The main character is gay, and I deal with some “gay” storylines, especially in the first book or two. And the world has changed MASSIVELY on gay issues in the last ten years. I mean, it’s been a REVOLUTION. That wouldn’t really matter, except for the fact that in the timeline of all four books, it all takes place over the course of a single year (so far).

For a while, this really drove me crazy. But then (a) I worked it out in my mind — the books are set around 2007-2008, and (b) I realized it doesn’t matter all that much anyway. Books are about emotional truth. And the core feelings haven’t changed all THAT much from 2003 to 2013.

But I’ll tell you what: I made two choices early on that I’m really glad I made.

First, very little angst. Sometimes the themes are serious, but I also wanted the books to be funny, not depressing. And second, I made most of the pop culture references really familiar ones, but ones that were set in the distant past — Mary Poppins, Gone with the Wind, The Goonies. 

I’m really, really glad I did both those things, because I think they would have made the books seem incredibly dated right now otherwise.

BH_TRMS4_TheElephantofSurprise3. Was there anything particularly challenging or particularly easy about writing THE ELEPHANT OF SURPRISE?

This goes back to knowing my audience. The story in a nutshell? Russel is bored and wants more adventure in his life. So he begins a wildly passionate romance with a mysterious guy he first meets scrounging food in a Dumpster. The guy’s a “freegan,” someone who’s voluntarily choosing to be homeless. He and his friends eat roadkill and squat in houses and explore abandoned buildings. He’s got this whole, fantastic philosophy worked out.

Okay, so “romance” and “Dumpster diving” are not themes you usually see associated together. And that was exactly the point! I wanted to do something really unusual and attention-getting and DIFFERENT — not like a thousand other YA books you’ve read before. 

But I knew two things from the very beginning: First, that my readers would “get it.” Hey, they know that when you read a “Brent Hartinger” book, things won’t necessarily be “normal.” Russel’s last big romance was with a burn survivor who has a huge scar covering half of his face. And my readers totally love Otto (I do too).

But with this new book, I also knew it would be something of a hard sell to the larger world. It’s not about a girl who turns out to be a princess, or a sparkly vampire. I would have to work hard to make the case that a guy who eats out of Dumpsters and breaks into abandoned buildings can be a figure of great mystery and romance.

I think I pulled it off — again, a lot of it goes back to humor. You can get away with a lot if your main character is funny. But I had to give this all a lot of thought, to figure out how to get the casual reader to come along on this journey with me.

4. What are some of your favorite YA novels (other than your own) and why are they your favorites?

Well, I’m a big fan of “plot.” There’s this idea that character and voice are hard, but plot is easy — something that can sort of be done as an afterthought. But I actually think plot is just as hard as character and voice — maybe even harder. That’s why you see so much horrible plotting! (Also, because a lot of writers, and some critics, don’t seem to care about plot AT ALL, but that’s a whole different rant.)

Anyway, I love Ken Oppel’s Airborn and Apprenticeship of Victor Frankenstein books; Libba Bray’s Gemma Doyle trilogy; Jonathan Stroud’s Bartimaeus Sequence books; and, of course, Suzanne Collins’ The Hunger Games books (although, oddly, I didn’t care for the third book in that series at all).

5. What advice do you have for other authors writing children’s literature?

These last few years, it seems like the YA genre has really collapsed into “trends,” with publishers desperately trying to exploit whatever the last big hit was. Everything is vampires, then paranormal romance, then dystopian. I don’t like this at all. It seems like Hollywood, with their obsession with sequels and remakes and reboots: a profitable business strategy, but a lack of creativity and exploration on a very fundamental level.

(I’m not pointing fingers at individual authors, because I know that in a lot of these cases, these “rip-off” books were written even before the popular book they’re supposed to be ripping off. And some of these later books are also very good.)

But I just can’t work this way. I think it’s really, really important for YA authors to be AWARE of trends. Because if you’re writing a dystopian vampire novel right now … well, good luck with that. But then you have to ignore the trends, no matter what the market is screaming at you.

If your goal is to get rich and famous, sure, ape the trends — but get in early. (On the other hand, if your goal is get rich and famous, boy, are YOU in the wrong line of work!)

But if you’re goal is to be creative and creatively satisfied, ignore the trends and go personal: write the book that DOESN’T exist, the book that only you can write. Come up with a genre that doesn’t even exist yet! (And then come up with a good lie for your agent so she has a way to pitch it to some publisher…)

Honestly, this might be a harder path, given the way the industry has become lately. But I think this is how you end up with (a) a more lasting career, (b) a more creatively satisfying one, and (c) very, very loyal fans.

Thanks for taking the time to blab with me, Brent! I can’t wait to see GEOGRAPHY CLUB on the big screen!

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Gay YA and Me: A Love Story

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So, I don’t identify myself as homosexual. I’m a straight, married, white woman. I’m pretty comfortable saying I’m around a 2 or a 2.5 on the Kinsey Scale. (That is considered “straight,” right?) My kids (as far as I know) are all straight, as are my parents, siblings and my very closest friends. I do have some friends who are gay. And I have cousins who are gay, who live the most normal, middle-class, suburban, family life, with no more strife or focused discrimination than most people I’m familiar with (again, as far as I know). Of course they live in Massachusetts, which helps with that pesky marriage issue. So why, one might ask, am I so damn concerned with gay issues?

Ms. Magazine 1972

Ms. Magazine 1972

Well, first let me give you a little bit of background about myself: I grew up during the 1970’s. My mom was a self-proclaimed feminist and a proud early member of NOW. I lived in a town and went to a school with people of all colors. Our family considered ourselves politically liberal. I still consider myself both a feminist and a liberal, even though those words are sometimes now loaded with all kinds of nasty, derogatory meaning. When I was a kid it just so happened that my very first best friend (like when I was 4 years old) was physically handicapped and in third grade my best friend was Hispanic. In fifth grade one of my BFFs was substantially overweight. In middle school I had a crush on a black boy (but a friend of mine was the one who “got” him) and in high school I was pretty good friends with a boy who was considered “artistic and flamboyant,” which in the late 70’s was code for something else.

Um, so who really gives a shit about  your childhood?” you say. “Big deal. A lot of people grow up ‘open minded.’ What difference does any of this make regarding what issues you feel strongly about? I’m sure you’re very evolved. But really isn’t it just that you’re a bleeding heart liberal weenie, Linda? Hunh? Isn’t it?

Well, yes. Yes I am.

But also, I’ve always  loved people. I love people for who they are, not who they love, not what their race, ethnicity, sex or religion is, not what their body looks like or what it can/cannot do.

imagesI’m concerned with gay rights, and I’m committed to representing books that include, are written by or written for people in the LGBTQ community because of that love of people. You know, I love human beings as a species, because we are so damned interesting. In a general sense I guess I’m just enamored with the human condition. I mean, I really do think about shit like “the meaning of life,” or “can we ever be truly content?” or “what does death mean?” But I digress… What I’m trying to say is, I think that because I love people I’m interested in issues surrounding human rights.

Right now is a moment in history when we, as a country, have begun to tackle discrimination based on sexual orientation. (For the moment, let’s not get into how racial and sexual discrimination hasn’t improved as much as I thought it would have back in the ‘70s.) I feel like our country is slowly catching up to talk about (if not always to deal with) some of the issues that have always been on my mind and in my heart.

OpenlyStraight_CVSo why am I going on and on about this on the blog today? What does this have to do with books? Well, first of all it’s my damn blog. I can write whatever I want. Click out if you don’t want to hear my rambles. But secondly, I’m writing about this because I’d like to celebrate young adult literature that represents the GLBTQ experience. Today I’m focusing on YA because a. It’s a great time to read gay YA, with a veritable explosion of fantastic books in the past 10 or so years; b. Today’s young adults are tomorrow’s grownups, so it’s fascinating to read what they’re reading; c. My client Bill Konigsberg’s young adult book, Openly Straight, comes out June 1st and I’m excited beyond belief; and d. Didn’t you hear me before? It’s my damn blog and I can write about whatever I want.

Recently there have been some interesting articles about gay YA, with a particular focus on how gay characters have been evolving in literature. I think this might be because the conversation about what it means to be anywhere on the GLBTQ spectrum has also been evolving. This month there was a terrific blog post by Bill, and an article in The Atlantic Wire specifically about this issue. They are way more eloquent than I can ever be. There’s also a nice article by David Levithan talking about his book BOY MEETS BOY, which first came out ten years ago.

BH_TRMS4_TheElephantofSurpriseI’ve been reading quite a few gay YA books recently because well, as I said, I enjoy them, but also if I represent clients who write in this genre I’d better be reading the genre and understanding it. Currently I’m reading THE ELEPHANT OF SURPRISE by Brent Hartinger, who has been kind enough to agree to be interviewed by me. Look for that interview here on the blog this coming Monday, April 29th. On my bedside table waiting to be read is MARCO IMPOSSIBLE, the newest treat from the inimitable Hannah Moskowitz and Maureen Johnson’s THE BERMUDEZ TRIANGLE, which I can’t believe I haven’t yet read. Also, I’m dying to get my hands on advanced reader’s copies of TWO BOYS KISSING (Knopf, August 2013) also by David Levithan and FREAKBOY (Farrar, Straus and Giroux, October 2013) by Kristin Elizabeth Clark, because I really hate having to wait for things.

How about you? Why do you/don’t you care about issues that may/may not affect you directly? And how does that inform your reading?

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FLASH FICTION CHALLENGE: The fate of Helga and Wolfgang

Two weeks ago, in one of client Joe McGee’s guest posts on dialogue, he used the following bits of dialogue, as different examples of what dialogue can accomplish:

“Honey, it’s a boy,” said Helga.Helga

“I’m so happy, I could raid a village,” Wolfgang said.

“Good, because we need milk.”

***

“Are you serious?” said Helga.

“Completely serious.”

“I don’t believe you,” she said.

“I’m serious,” said Wolfgang, “I drank all the milk…and ate their cows.”

***

“Wolfgang?”

“Busy!” He planted his axe in the giant’s foot.

“That’s no excuse,” said Helga.

“No excuse? I’m fighting a giant!”

“And I’m nursing a baby.”

“But-“

“Milk. Now,” said Helga, slamming the shutters closed.

***

“So…” said the giant. He looked down at the axe in his foot. “Here we are.”

“Here. We. Are,” said Wolfgang. He smiled up at the massive creature. “Don’t suppose you’d like to help me with my axe? It appears to be stuck.”

“In my foot,” said the giant.

Wolfgang nodded. “Yep.”

“Not particularly,” the giant said. “I’d much rather squash you.”

“Understandable.”

Wolfgang

“Wolfgang” by Joe McGee

But wait! What? That’s it!? What about Wolfgang? What about his axe? What about Helga and that baby? Will Wolfgang get the milk or will the giant squash him? I need to know!

So, that’s NOT it, my friends… YOU are challenged to pen the ending to Joe’s story. Be funny, be epic, be gritty, or romantic. Whatever you do, be creative. The story is yours!

Here are the rules to this FLASH FICTION CHALLENGE (and here, there be PRIZES):

1. You have 1 week to post your entry. The contest closes at 7am on May 1.

2. 650 word max.

3. Only 1 entry per person

4. Please post your entry as a comment to this challenge

5. The judges will be looking for creativity, good dialogue (this did start as a dialogue post after all), and a compelling/satisfying ending to the tale.

6. The judge’s panel consists of: Joe McGee, R.L. Saunders, and M-E Girard. They tell me they cannot be bought, bribed, or otherwise coerced… but wait! Is that bacon? Bacon wrapped in cheese? Joe, step away from the bacon…

8. A first place prize and a runner up will be awarded, with first place winning a first page critique of your manuscript by me and the runner up getting a book on the craft of writing (I’ll make sure it’s something you don’t already have).

9. The winner & runner up will be announced on Wednesday, May 8.

So, have at it! Let’s see what you come up with. The fate of the milk, axe, and our Vikings is in your hands. I can’t wait to see what you come up with.

**If you are one of my clients you can enter for fun but you are not eligible to win one of the prizes.

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7 Questions for Fiction Writers

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1. What are you afraid of when you write? What are you certain of? 

2. What color is sad? What’s the shape of hopelessness? What smell lingers from resignation?

3. When you feel happy, content and peaceful, can you write? When you are in the depths of despair can you?

4. Think very carefully: if you could only read one novel for the rest of your life, what would it be and why did you pick it?

5. Do you believe in aliens? Do you believe in God? Do you have a pet? Do you like bananas?

6. So, if the novel you picked for number 4 wasn’t available, what would you pick? How long did it take you to come up with that?

7. Why will you/won’t you write today? Is that the truth?

 

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GUEST POST: When Writing Your Second Novel

MacBook_Air_13-inch_35330106_01_620x433A little bit of pillow talk…

I’m onto you. Registering for writing workshops online, your fingers sticky with candy. Teen Mom 2 on my LED-backlit display instead of words, your words. All the signs are there.

You’re afraid of your second novel.

There was something between us once, back when you were writing your first. You used to turn me on in the morning—before a shower, before cereal—and we would escape into the story. It was all fun and fantasy; there was no pressure but the weight of your imagination and fingertips.

I was with you through it all: the early drafts you swore were awful, the rejections, the never-ending revisions. And I was there for the good stuff, too, like when you landed an agent. Do you remember? My exclamation mark was on fire for you that day.

But then reality kicked in. The submission process was long and hard, and you’re not a patient person by nature. I can tell by the pace of your typing, the impulsiveness of your online shopping.

You let the doubt creep in; I know it. You’re afraid of giving your heart to a second story without feeling secure about the first. And you’re terrified of the time, the years that you’ll be investing in another novel that may never… that may never ever…

But enough is enough. You may not have a deal for your first book yet, but come on! You’re acting like a contract is a permission slip to write another!

Sigh.

 I’m sorry; I got carried away. It’s just that, well, I miss you. I miss the feel of your touch against my sensitive keys, the way you hit “return” like you mean it. And I know you miss me, too.

You need to start writing again. Do it for us, for those early mornings when it was just you, me and coffee. You were always so careful not to spill. Don’t think I didn’t notice.

So sit down, here, at your desk. I’m powered up and ready.

I’ll even give you two minutes to watch the squirrels out the window. Look at them racing through the pines, leaping from branch to branch. You can be that free, too. Just put your hands on me, run your fingers over my keys, and write write write…Emily Saso

Emily Saso is a copywriter working hard to become a novelist. She lives, reads and writes in Toronto, Canada. 

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